What’s in Your Bag?

I x copy of Maus I & II
1 x over-used Macbook Pro
1 x knock-off iPhone charger
1 x notebook I’ve had since freshman year
1 x computer charger
1 x set of earbuds that aren’t mine
1 x unopened copy of Nuovo Espresso II
1 x copy of Nuovo Espresso Supplementari
1 x portable charger I always forget to charge
1 x pack of colored pens
1 x Kindle that I don’t read enough
1 x set of keys
I x copy of Captains of Consciousness
1 x mechanical pencil that’s currently out of lead
1 x blue ink pen
2 x white pens
This photograph is somewhat reflective of myself as a person. I feel like the content in this image (to the naked eye) would portray, “an astute, well-organized, overly-battery-concious high school student.” But I am definitely far from orderly. Though I definitely have some degree of OCD which compels me straighten things and orient all objects at right angles. I am very particular about how things look and appear, and for whatever reason the brightly colored carpet beneath the objects bothered me, and created a backdrop that I found distracting. So I edited the photo to make the carpet appear black & white, with only the objects appearing in color. Also, when I was arranging the objects on the floor someone stepped into the room and said, “that looks like a crime scene.” That comment gave me the idea of outlining each object like detectives did in old murder mystery movies, which is something that never made sense to me, but I thought it created a more interesting visual nonetheless.


I actually thought of this joke a while ago. When telling it to people, the idea where a sperm whale would satisfy both of their desires really set in. That’s why I chose to show that text for an entire scene. It was also to give a little sense that them seeing the sperm whale takes place later. The hardest part of this assignment was the idea behind the comic. Once I could solidify the idea as a comic, it became the challenge to decide what the most important elements of the humor were so that they could be distributed appropriately into the three scenes. Another challenging aspect of this assignment was the brevity. Typically in other writing assignments given in writing classes, there is the general idea that longer and more explanation is better. In this case, however, that is not true. Adapting to that change was interesting but allows for more creative interpretation than formal writing does.




